T-Rex: People, SUCH AS MYSELF, are tired of speculative fiction where everything's the same, except for one chilling difference!
T-Rex: They want a world where everything is DIFFERENT, except for one chilling similarity!
T-Rex: So HERE WE GO! *ahem*.
T-Rex: Z;krlogh 217, a boundless hivemind (this is the part you can recognize) whose senses were so alien to us as to be completely unfathomable, reacted to what they sensed. This reaction played out in areas of experience forbidden to all but Z;krlogh 217. THE END.
Utahraptor: I feel like your readers might need something they can latch on to.
T-Rex: You may be right!
T-Rex: My NEW character, Rich Eader, showed up! He needed everything explained to him with simple Earth metaphors. And every time he figured something out, he'd deliver one of his patented "R.Eader Explanations"!
Utahraptor: Somehow, you made it catastrophically worse??
T-Rex: ...Part of me thought I'd go my whole career without someone telling me my writing made things "catastrophically worse"!
T-Rex: *sigh*
T-Rex: Although in retrospect, I'm really not sure why
